You rate it

[les fountain]

I have posted 3 chapters of My story ' The Black Crystal '.
now you rate it.

For the people that don't know what this poll is scoring go here (http://www.writersdictionary.com/land%20of%20the%20lost.htm)
I ask this because, I do not want to post a story if no one wants to read it.

((( all remaining chapters will be posted in the 'Chapter 3 The Black Crystal' listing so look for them to be listed every Friday until all remaining chapter's have been listed )))

[les fountain]

I am using this old vote post since it will work for what I want that way I do not have another one on here .... I just wanted to ask the people it they think I should keep writing the Black crystal story ( I know it says the end on my post ) just pass you vote.

I have also been thinking about writing a story that tell where Squeaky came from in the first place so if you want this you can also tell me that here http://www.landofthelost.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3071

[The end]

I voted when you first posted this and now it want let me vote again so again I will say Hell yea write it!

'If he writes it we will come' sounds like I could make a movie from that line.

[Tiamat]

LOL I wonder who wrote "I've seen better writing on a shampoo bottle". I voted for your story as well Les. I thought it was well written. I can only wish, hope, and/or pray that hollywood will take a great storyline like that when they make the LOTL movie but I'm not holding my breath. Most of the people on this site could write their movie for them and have one hell of a story to it but I'm sure hollywood doesn't care about that...just the almighty $.
Keep on Rockin Les,
--Tia

[les fountain]

LOL I wonder who wrote "I've seen better writing on a shampoo bottle". I voted for your story as well Les. I thought it was well written. I can only wish, hope, and/or pray that hollywood will take a great storyline like that when they make the LOTL movie but I'm not holding my breath. Most of the people on this site could write their movie for them and have one hell of a story to it but I'm sure hollywood doesn't care about that...just the almighty $.
Keep on Rockin Les,
--Tia

Tia I will have to say that this is the nicest post I have ever recieved one likes to tell himself / herself that it dosen't matter what people say but as we all know.
If a person puts a lot of work / themself into a peice of work then it means alot when other people like it.
I know that their will always be some people that do not like whatever some people do and I can overlook that but when someone says something nice I choose not to overlook that even if I could :) so I say Thank you.

now as to what you said.

1 = QUOTE= LOL I wonder who wrote "I've seen better writing on a shampoo bottle"

Reply = I made that post up a while back and chose to write that shampoo statement since I figured it would almost make people want to click on it == now people may wonder why I would try to get bad votes, well I am not but since this vote is for my story and my story is about land of the lost and posted on a land of the lost site I figured it would have just a pinch of favoritism so I made that shampoo statement to try and even the vote out.

2 = QUOTE= I voted for your story as well Les. I thought it was well written. I can only wish, hope, and/or pray that hollywood will take a great storyline like that when they make the LOTL movie.

Reply = This is the drama statement , the tear jerker ( they like me - they really like me :) ) , the run around the yard naked and jump barbed wire fence and have one of life most embarrassing moments statements ( woohoo they like me I'm free ,I feel so alive and energetic I think I could jump that fence Wee OH SH*T 'I'm hung man!
No really I got my danglers hung , What are you doing with that video camera ? Come on man that aint cool ! )

"NO, but it's funny."

"No its not!"

"Well then why are all those people behide you rolling around on the ground laughing."

"Man I will get you for this"

"No you can't your hung"

AAAHHHH F-RR-EEEE-D-OO-MMM

:) :) :)

3 - Qoute = Keep on Rockin Les.

Reply = I can't read reply to qoute #2

Once again with all joking aside I say thanks.

[Tiamat]

Your reply on Quote #2 paints a funny, if not very painful, picture but you're very welcome. I realize that posting works like stories, poems, ETC publicly, takes courage because not everyone's going to like them and some people can be very rude and senseless.
Again, you're very welcome :)
--Tia

[enoch]

If there is one thing worse than the writing on a shampoo bottle, it is the writing on a real poo bottle.

[les fountain]

If there is one thing worse than the writing on a shampoo bottle, it is the writing on a real poo bottle.

your right Enoch. yep yep yep

Um just where do you by those anyway. :eek:

ha ha

[phantom]

Wish I knew who voted for Squeaky, by the way people have not seen much of squeaky in my new story 'The white crystal' but you will before the end of it, but be warned ..... well I will just leave it at that.

[phantom]

Wow The story Got another Bad vote........Do I hear three, who will give me Three, three three - Four give me Four - three over here yep three four give me three...... come on folks this is a grammar error classic, out of place words everywhere-------- you gentleman in the back, how bout you, give me three.................................... :D


Cool

[Tiamat]

Unfortunately, when posting stories and other things of that nature on a public message board, I guess you have to be able to take the criticism [sp?] that comes along with it. From your last post, at least I see that you're taking it well :D
Take care man!
--Tia

[phantom]

Unfortunately, when posting stories and other things of that nature on a public message board, I guess you have to be able to take the criticism [sp?] that comes along with it. From your last post, at least I see that you're taking it well :D
Take care man!
--Tia
Yea I don't let it get to me much, I know the story needs lots of work.

But heres the way I look at it..... 'The Black Crystal' is 101 pages long ( when using book format of 250 word per page ) and I have wrote another 40 pages for 'The White Crystal' and I will write at least another 10 pages and as you can tell its all really one story so by the time its all finished I will have wrote over a 150 pages , and thats alot of work.
My novel has been on hold for so long ( about 1 1/2 years ) that I don't even remember it anymore :) but I wanted to give the fans of land of the lost something to read other than just a 10 pages of less story, not that there is anything wrong with a short story. I am sure there are some people out there that wished this story had been 10 pages of less ;)
I know that most of the people that once read my story ( well I figure ) have now moved on to other interest but I want to finish it just the same.

I have other things I need to do as well.

1- Write another story for my website - how I am ever going to find the time I don't know.

2 - Finish my Novel, 'Tears Of Innocence' ( I have 130 pages wrote ) and its the first of two ( part 1 and 2 ) I need to write and I want both stories to be around 350 pages

3 - a small movie project .... to do the movie project I will have to learn many programs such ad 3d studio max, adobe premiere, adobe after effects, many sound programs as well - the list is long and time is short .

So with all this in mind its a wonder I have any time to write these crystal stories. I really wish I had some kind of list of the people that was reading it.

[phantom]

Professor: In order to prove to you that it is not about my story. I will remove it.



It takes a lot of work to Create something like this after all it was over 130 pages long, but if you wish to make the people Think that I just want to be the center of this board with my story I will remove it to prove the point void.

I know this is not fair to the other people that might want to read the story so you can contact me by email or P.M.

TO READ THE STORY CLICK HERE (http://www.writersdictionary.com/land%20of%20the%20lost.htm)

[Professor]

Very dramatic. Actually, what I said was that you were making the thread about yourself, not the whole board. It's there in black and white.